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Conversion-Optimized Messaging: Creating Copy That Drives Measurable Results

Part 3: Narrate - Crafting Messages That Connect

Reading time: 8 minutes | Video length: 28 minutes

Welcome to the third installment of our four-part Cannonball methodology series. As we emphasized in previous modules, you need to complete Part 1: Focus and Part 2: Investigate before diving into this Narrate module. Each component builds on the previous ones to create a complete, effective AI marketing system.

Executive Summary

  • The Narrate module teaches you how to build a customer-centric messaging stack

  • You'll learn how to transform your targeting data directly into compelling copy

  • We'll show you how to develop segment-specific messaging that addresses precise pain points

  • This approach ensures your marketing speaks directly to your customers' actual challenges

  • The right message to the right segment creates campaigns "so good people would pay to receive them"

Where Narrate Fits in the FIND Framework

Building on the foundation we've established:

  1. Focus - Understand your product's market position and your ideal customers ✓

  2. Investigate - Research and analyze customer data and market opportunities ✓

  3. Narrate - Craft compelling messaging and campaign narratives ← You are here

  4. Deploy - Execute multi-channel campaigns with precision

Three Core Goals of the Narrate Stage

1. Build a Customer-Centric Messaging Stack

The most important goal of the Narrate stage is creating messaging that speaks directly from your customers' perspective. Rather than focusing on your product features, you'll learn to articulate how your solution addresses specific pain points that you've identified in the Investigate stage.

For our Skimmer example (pool service software), we built messaging around three key segments we discovered:

  • Time Savings Segment: Pool service companies whose reviews mention scheduling and routing challenges

  • Growth-Related Breakdown Segment: Companies experiencing quality issues as they scale

  • Service Quality Deterioration Segment: Companies struggling to maintain standards across technicians

The Narrate stage helps you create tailored messaging for each segment that resonates with their specific challenges.

2. Create Copy That Genuinely Connects

Generic marketing copy rarely drives action. The Narrate stage helps you create copy that genuinely connects by:

  • Using your customers' actual language (from the reviews you analyzed)

  • Addressing specific pain points at exactly the right moment in their journey

  • Providing clear solutions to their most pressing challenges

  • Speaking to the emotional and practical aspects of their problems

The goal is to have your target audience think: "This company understands exactly what I'm going through."

3. Transform Your List into Compelling Messages

In the Investigate stage, we emphasized that "the list IS the message." Now we make that concrete by transforming our targeting insights into specific messaging for each segment.

For Skimmer, we developed distinct messaging approaches for each segment, ensuring that our campaigns would speak directly to their unique challenges:

  • For companies with routing inefficiencies

  • For businesses experiencing growing pains

  • For operators concerned about maintaining service quality standards

The Messaging Development Process

The Narrate stage uses AI to help you develop comprehensive messaging frameworks for each segment. Here's the process we followed:

  1. Warm up the AI model with all the context from your Focus and Investigate stages

  2. Run targeted messaging prompts for each identified segment

  3. Evaluate the outputs against your knowledge of the customer and brand

  4. Select the strongest messaging direction based on resonance with customer pain points

Let's walk through how we did this for Skimmer:

Step 1: The Messaging Prompt

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After warming up Claude with all our previous research, we used a comprehensive messaging prompt that included:

  • Brand voice parameters

  • Category context

  • Target audience specifics

  • Value proposition elements

  • Supporting value points

We then requested specific deliverables:

  • Brand narrative (the overall story)

  • Value proposition (the core promise)

  • Supporting points (the evidence)

  • Headline options

  • Subheadline options

  • Short copy blocks

Step 2: Generate Segment-Specific Messaging

We ran the prompt three times, once for each of our identified segments:

Time Savings Segment:

The Copy

Every growing pool service business reaches a critical turning point when the systems that once worked perfectly begin to break down. At 40+ pools, manual scheduling and paperwork become unsustainable as routes grow more complex and customers expect consistent service.

Growth-Related Breakdown Segment:

The Copy

When your pool service business outgrows your ability to personally oversee every job, quality and consistency often suffer. The expertise that once lived in your head becomes increasingly difficult to transfer, and what worked perfectly when "it was just you" no longer scales with your growing team and customer base.

Service Quality Deterioration Segment:

The Copy

When chemical readings vary between visits, when customers report missed service steps, when your once-perfect standards start slipping through the cracks - these are signs your pool service business needs systems, not just more effort. As your reputation grows, so does the challenge of maintaining the quality that built it.

Step 3: Evaluate and Select

After reviewing all three options, we determined that the Growth-Related Breakdown messaging had the strongest resonance with Skimmer's target audience. Why?

  • It addressed the most painful transition point (scaling beyond the owner's personal capacity)

  • It acknowledged both the practical and emotional challenges of scaling

  • It touched on the core fear: losing the quality that built the business

  • It positioned systems as the solution, not just working harder

This segment's value proposition was particularly strong:

"Scale your pool service business without sacrificing quality. Skimmer transforms your personal service standards into scalable systems that maintain consistency across any number of routes, technicians, and customers."

Key Insights from the Messaging Development

Identifying the Critical Transition Point

The most powerful messaging came from identifying exactly when customers feel the most acute pain. For pool service companies, this wasn't just about having "a lot of pools" - it was specifically about the transition from owner-operated to team management:

"What worked perfectly when 'it was just you' no longer scales with your growing team and customer base."

This speaks directly to a sentiment we found repeatedly in customer reviews, creating immediate recognition and resonance.

The Paper-to-Digital Transformation

A recurring theme in our research was the transition from paper-based systems to digital management. This represents more than just a technology shift - it's a fundamental business transformation:

"Transform administrative chaos into efficient workflows that free you to focus on growth."

This messaging acknowledges both the practical benefit (efficiency) and the emotional benefit (freedom to focus on what matters).

Preserving Standards During Growth

Perhaps the most powerful theme we discovered was the tension between growth and quality maintenance:

"Protect the standards that built your reputation while expanding to serve more customers."

This messaging directly addresses the fear that success might undermine the very quality that created it - a concern that resonates deeply with service business owners.

From Messaging to Multi-Channel Campaigns

As we prepare for the Deploy stage, we discussed how this messaging would translate across different channels:

Email Marketing: The specificity of our messaging makes email particularly powerful. As Jordan noted, we can create highly targeted messages like:

"I read Jessica's review last week that said service was great at Perry Pools until you started scaling. I think there's a way for your customers to still experience your value even as you grow..."

By referencing specific customer feedback and local success stories, these emails can achieve remarkable connection and conversion rates.

Social Media Channels: While email allows for specificity, social media campaigns build broader awareness and recognition. The messaging we developed can be adapted for platforms like YouTube and Facebook to create category awareness and drive interest.

As Doug noted, a multi-channel approach is most effective, with each channel playing a distinct role:

  • Broad channels create awareness and context

  • Targeted emails deliver the precise, conversion-focused message

  • Together, they create a cohesive customer journey

Next Steps: Preview of Deploy Module

In our final session, we'll move into the Deploy module, where you'll learn:

  • How to translate your messaging into specific campaign elements

  • Techniques for optimizing each channel based on your segments

  • Methods for measuring campaign effectiveness

  • Tools for continuous refinement of your approach

Your Narrate Challenge

Before our next session, try applying the Narrate framework to your own product or service:

  1. Use the messaging prompt to develop segment-specific messaging for your top segment

  2. Create at least three headline options that speak directly to your segment's pain point

  3. Draft a value proposition that addresses both practical and emotional benefits

  4. Share what you develop in the comments (optional)

Questions for Discussion

  • Which segment of your audience experiences the most acute pain that your solution solves?

  • What transition points or thresholds exist in your customers' journey where your solution becomes essential?

  • How might you customize your messaging for different channels while maintaining a consistent core story?


Remember: Great marketing isn't about talking about your product—it's about showing customers you understand their problems better than anyone else. As we've seen in this module, the right message to the right segment at the right time creates campaigns that truly connect.

Join us on March 12th for our final installment: Part 4: Deploy, where we'll transform these messages into complete campaigns.

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